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看了10章，选择弃文，不是说作者写的不好，说说我的看法吧。第一，作者文笔很好，可是过于注重文笔了，这种表述方式实在是不大合我的胃口，或许是过于追求意象，过于文艺了。第二，全文有些飘，就是情节一点也不扎实，代入感不强。第三，我是读者嘛，读者读书不是为了听说教的，这个作品里说教的东西有点多，大扣分，你要是想宣扬什么其实可以在事上体现，比如你想表达父爱，我看过的书被父爱感动的不少，可是都是被事感动的，父亲做了什么事，踏踏实实的写，读者看完心里感觉父爱可真伟大啊……你该让读者自己去感受，而不是你几句话说什么事，然后自己去评论，这不是小说的写法。总的来说，这个文写的不踏实，不是我喜欢的类型。或者这么说，乍一看绝对是好书，但禁不住细看，看一章觉得很好，越看越觉得少滋味。话说的有些过，只是我自己的看法，毕竟我只是读者，平时也不大看太正经的书，作者对我的意见不必太在意，还是希望作者能取得好成绩。
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